Scary Oil - Summary
Military conflict between Israel and Iran has resulted in
the rise of oil prices, causing an impact to the global economy, furthermore aggravating
the financial crisis during 2008. The rise is to prevent Iran from producing
nuclear weapons. If proven futile, the US will be supporting Israel through
military means against Iran, whom has already reacted by attacking Israeli
embassies. If the conflict continues,
oil prices will continue to rise, leading to a global recession.
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ReplyDeleteMilitary conflict between Israel and Iran has resulted in the rise of oil prices, causing an impact to the global economy and aggravating the financial crisis during 2008. The increase in oil prices is to prevent Iran from producing nuclear weapons. If proven futile, the US will be supporting Israel through military means against Iran, which has already reacted by attacking Israeli embassies. If the conflict continues, oil prices will continue to rise, leading to a global recession